grimview's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rowantree]

Published projects should be for finished works, but the dumping grounds is for uploads. On the forums there's a couple of places you can post to get feedback or advice on an unfinished project. There's also a review club, but I haven't can luck with them. I recommend reading through some of the animation forum request for feedback and advice to get some ideas before posting your own question.
Also the heart beat worked in the opening, but not the whole video. The eyes opening and zooming in worked with heartbeat. The white lines on trees at the end didn't work.

jcjacobsson responds:

Thanks, I'm totally new here and did't know were to start uploading. My attention is to make the heartbeat follow the emotion of the boy but I've not got there yet.
The white lines, did you mean the light from the lamp?

[a Thirsty guy]

the animation is decent but the plot is lacking & it ends suddenly.

204nabil responds:

for you information i stop it here because it was long story
and that was my fault
thanks anyway

[Randell is BATMAN!]

Not bad, though it would have been nice to see what the hench men really were.

[barricade 2nd fragment]

A good start but lacking sound, we have to read or watch. Also no replay button.

[Attack of the Probers 1]

Interesting story line. Decent animation.

[Lolssin's Creed]

You should finish this.

[Cuble's: Nightmare]

Not bad for a start.

Mathereon responds:

Thanks dude^^

[Falcon Charm]

This well animated. Make more before the trial runs out. Something may be wrong with the play button, or it just took awhile to load, so try a pre loader.

OttoBullrigger responds:

Thanks for your review. I'm on the loading issue and will upload the revised animation as soon as possible.

[Aalbert R.a. Of Spectacul]

This was very fluid and well done animation, but was also unfinished because we could see the background through the charters. There was no plot but I'm guessing you where going for an TV show opening, its a great start.

AaLBERT responds:

Thank you. I did this video because I love Spider-Man... The Amazing Spider-Man that made Mister Romita. I'm glad you like it =)

[I will find you]

This was well animated but I don't get why the bear didn't eat the girl. I can understand the that girls sent may be on the heart charm, but that don't explain why the bear liked the girl in the first place.