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[The Whole Journey]

This reminds me of the many 'my story animated' channels. However, it also has many of the problems. First the uncle & the trafficker look alike. She talks about the uncle turning a blind eye but not the aunt. Then after the uncle takes from school, there's no more physical abuse which could imply that aunt was beating her, but the way the story is worded ("family member") & shown (random red hand prints possibly from slaps) the viewer may assume the uncle raped her. She can't travel without a male escort but some how is able to meet up with merchant that just happens to be trafficker. Men are abusing me so naturally I run off with the first man I met & now I'm being sold daily. Really every single day? Then the UN rescues her for being "homeless" & puts in Hagar, which is apparently a women only building despite women not be able to leave the house without a man, because I guess all men rape. Why would the UN get involved in homelessness? At Hagar she is described as being like a feral wild animal that can't read & write; However, she's able to learn to read several languages & become a master programmer. Well hopeful the UN & Hagar are paying well for this advertisement.

sketchysquirrel responds:

Thank you for your review. I grew up amongst this work and unfortunately this reflects far too many peoples lives. Women and children are often dis-empowered, with trauma predisposing them to future abuse. In this story, I left many things unsaid, the depth of some people's suffering is disturbingly immense. No one was paid for this animation, I simply wanted to raise awareness.

[Karen Kong VS Managerzilla]

Please tell your manager that we were expecting a fight, like a physical fight & we would like to return this video for an adjustment.

Karen Kong just stood there shaking fist & manager Zila came out the water & then they just stood there having a normal conversation. Also both seemed to have the same voice.

animunch responds:

That's a very grim view

[Chidori]

Try uploading this to the art portal as gif. Its not animated enough to count as movie.

TinyBronco responds:

Will do. Also feel it does not fit but I try to export it from Procreate and it's evil.
Thanks

[You Just Got Served | The Benny the Bunny Show! #5]

You should ditch (or shorten) the stuffed animal intro, as 30 seconds is enough time for many users to rate & quit, before seeing the animated cartoon.
Otherwise its well animated, cute, decently colored, sound is a little out of sync, plot doesn't make lot of sense. An intro (or description field) that explains the premises might help, like why does a dog wears a bunny costume to kidnap a mermaid?

AndraeToons responds:

Well, I’ll explain the hole bunny costume thing in another episode, plus he doesn’t want to kidnap Merissa, he likes her that explains why he tells her to pucker up and kiss him.

[Luffy VS Kaido! - OP BATTLES!! (One Piece Fan-Animation)]

You might want to zoom in some, we can barely see the little dude.

Tyro1301 responds:

I suppose I could have made him a bit bigger.

[Elon's New Product!]

Sadly Furies & anime fans, really would fund a company that tries to produce cat girls resulting in an inflated stock price even if it had actual product.

Silverelick responds:

My thoughts Exactly. However the Furries would get more out of the deal due to the failures and their more "appealing" traits to that group.

[Rubyer IV: Part 1]

Too much pausing. Need to slow down.

mattyburrito responds:

I definitely need to work on balancing the timing of it all

[History of Communism Part1 (Marx)]

Marx was NOT poor! Poor people can't afford college, let alone get kicked out of Germany to & still afford to attend another college in England. Marx was married to a rich woman, but was not excepted by other rich people. However, other rich people rejected Marx, so Marx sought to harm those people.

QuteRious responds:

Thank you for your feedback ;)

[Girls on social media]

Get a better mic, have know idea what she said.
Its funny & decent animation.

GeorgeQ responds:

Thanks for the tip! I don’t think it was the mic, maybe it was the editing on the voice. I’ll see how the sound on my claymation turns out. Let me know

[TD-Manga-ka]

How can you mention Keenspace without mentioning Gastly? Gastly was literally bringing in the money that kept that site alive!

Raziberry responds:

Gastly was a miserable excuse for an artist, dumber-than-dogshit, and a total asshole.