grimview's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[HOW TO BE LOVED]

What happened to step 2? This seems incomplete.

diegoastier responds:

I can't tell if you're being serious or not xD

[Goodbye Flash]

White letters on blurred screen are hard to read.

[December 10, 2020]

The voice acting works very well in this.

[Community & Diversity, LLC : Foamy The Squirrel]

You're close. We don't have a democracy without marketing, or using the community clans to cross market.
Sales 101, if I can get to subscribe then its easier to get you do something else like vote, buy, kill, market, whatever.
Sales 201, rebrand an old idea that is familiar. The word Diverse means "not alike" & the word Include means "place in category" because 60's term of "Segregating by categorical differences" is not as catchy sounding a rebranded phrase of "diversity & inclusion".

["Snow-bodies"]

Next time make a baby out of mud to be more politically correct.

[REAL CHILLY HOURS]

The next ice age is happening now because we all stayed home to long & didn't burn enough forest to the ground.
The snow was slow moving in some scenes, especially the last scene.

[Last mission]

If your going to have the character lips moving, then you need dialog, or text or though bubbles with pictures. Other wise we start playing with our volume.

[Caught him slippin']

Can't understand the opening audio, or what was said after "you got something I want."
The script needs work cause you go from street clothes to prison& guard clothes to door screaming. If not for the description on the thumb nail I would not know what is going on. Also you may want to copy the short descript to the long descript since that shows below the film.
You draw well but not much animation.

[SpaceForce1 New Trailer]

I can't tell if you are trolling or if this is a real project. You claim to want to raise money for 3 causes, but I doubt you make enough to support your self. Always help yourself before helping others. Sure there a lot of people dumping money into those causes, but why would this cartoon stand out among the 1000's of others. Also you claim to be still learning so how would you keep up the production schedule. If black live matter then should you at least have one black person on the cast be black? Why is Trump white instead of orange, I thought you cared about colored people. If you're fighting climate change, why does it take place in space? Even if you're going to stop the sun from expanding how many episode is that going to stretch too?
Either way we like to see movement in a trailer. Do some research on "Planned Animation" if you want Hanna Barbara level. Watch some top rated trailers on newgrounds to get some ideas.