Too much pausing. Need to slow down.
Too much pausing. Need to slow down.
I definitely need to work on balancing the timing of it all
I like the way the mouse twitches with the plastic straw torcher. However, the beep text is annoying to listen to & too wordy. Maybe try to reduce words.
Marx was NOT poor! Poor people can't afford college, let alone get kicked out of Germany to & still afford to attend another college in England. Marx was married to a rich woman, but was not excepted by other rich people. However, other rich people rejected Marx, so Marx sought to harm those people.
Thank you for your feedback ;)
Well of course witches have "Lairs." Why just the other the day Hansel & Gretel found witch's Lair in a ginger bread house & some have suggested that they are now getting Laid up in there cause no one has seen them since. However, I don't understand what that has to do with onions.
The history lesson is a little long in the middle, but at least Micky & Miney learned valuable lessons.
The problem with the trailer is we start looking for the sudle newgrounds images (which get lighter & harder to spot) only to miss the guy getting knocked off the train.
Get a better mic, have know idea what she said.
Its funny & decent animation.
Thanks for the tip! I don’t think it was the mic, maybe it was the editing on the voice. I’ll see how the sound on my claymation turns out. Let me know
Here's what we missed:
First Shaggy would have ran away.
Fred would have built some elaborate trap that wouldn't have worked but may beat the hell out Goku.
Goku would have been easily fooled by Shaggy in disguise & given a bag of sensu beans.
Over eating the beans gives supper powers to Shaggy to beat up Goku
During the fight Goku dropped the Dragon Balls.
Shaggy found the balls & wished he had a sandwitch instead, causing the balls to turn in to sandwiches.
Goku is try to save the balls as each one that Shaggy consumes only makes Shaggy more powerful & psychotic.
This way to short.
I knew it, alternative meat is murder & smiling happy people are literal psychotic killers. This is why its safer to be around angry carnivores.
It reminds me of how they got consent in the "Hustlers" movie.
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